Feedback wanted on Magento Accelerator with Hyva

Hi all, I work for an agency and we’re working on an accelerator that uses Magento with our in-house Hyva theme for B2B companies. The idea is that you can pretty much buy a B2B website off the shelf so it can go live in 2-4 weeks for £20k – all the features, functions, bells and whistles are there already installed for you (you can add more stuff on, it just costs a bit more).

you just need to give us your branding so we can update the theme. I’m looking for feedback on our landing page in the first instance – basically, a) does it make sense/is it clear what we’re offering b) do you think there would be much interest?

here’s what i’ve got so far – feedback much appreciated: https://www.fluidcommerce.co.uk/magento-b2b-ecommerce-accelerator/